Your analysis of question two, demonstrates minimal understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have not focused on similar themes that are evident in all three products. Instead you have included points on the soul conventions.
Therefore, you need to ensure that you focus more on the themes throughout. Images are also needed to support the points that you have made.
Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how all three products work together. You have identified various keywords, which contain a similarity between the products, however you need to discuss how it is evident in the music video and the ancillaries at the same time.
This now demonstrates a proficient understanding of how all three products work together and this is because you have explored your examples in further detail and referred to specific points, to demonstrate further understanding. Aim to place things in the correct order.
Your analysis of question two, demonstrates minimal understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have not focused on similar themes that are evident in all three products. Instead you have included points on the soul conventions.
ReplyDeleteTherefore, you need to ensure that you focus more on the themes throughout. Images are also needed to support the points that you have made.
Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how all three products work together. You have identified various keywords, which contain a similarity between the products, however you need to discuss how it is evident in the music video and the ancillaries at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThis now demonstrates a proficient understanding of how all three products work together and this is because you have explored your examples in further detail and referred to specific points, to demonstrate further understanding. Aim to place things in the correct order.
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